hmmm...
I'm having a hard time trying do determine the mood of it. Its dark but lowly, with a digital sort of sound to it.
The intro needs work, I think the siren/horn sound in the beginning is very random and out of place. This "Song" is very generic, it sounds more like a loop to me,
I recommend adding some Oscillators, or some type of grainy bass.
This has some potential, but it is very difficult for me to see it.